Umm, well, heh, oops on both parts??? Sorry about that, I didn't want to be too picky. >.< Oh well, let it cont. here. As for your friend, sorry, I don't mean harm, I'm just playing around. (There's that part of my profile I mentioned before of making people avoid me w/o meaning to... -.-)

As I stated before view/cam angles. You know, different perspectives? I saw this pic using this vat was drawn before so it kinda feels like a rerun to me, 'cept w/ you and your friend. Hence why I gave originality a lower score then norm. What I'm suggesting is drawing it at a different perspective. Example, say you were the 'Viewer' (in 1st person, of course) and you were in the vat as well but sunk deeper and looking up alil. This way it feels abit fresher.

Another thing I could say is maybe adding alil more, umm, movement? IDK? i.e Leg lifting and pulling, stretching, wiggling? Doesn't look like your struggling so much or trying to get deeper. x.x Also, maybe some x-ray vision on what's going on under the fluff with your legs, IDK, just something I happen to like to see and show how your floating. Also, this is a sticky vat filled with fluff, maybe the walls and edge could have some fluff sticking to the side, dripping back into the vat.

As I said before, your drawing skills tho have improved in how you draw your characters. Makes me happy as you really have come a long way in drawing. Coloring is still good as always but light shine, in this pic, seems lacking? Not sure how to word that. You know, that reflective shine you get when you beam light down on stuff? That's all I can think of atm but overall, it's a very nice drawing, I mean it.